Oh yeah. I'm not saying it's great writing. I mean the author takes four paragraphs to do something that not only could have been done in one or two, but could have been done without making readers who are identifying with his audience feel condescended to. Taking as long as he does opens him up to getting on people's nerves in a variety of ways, whether he gets on their nerves with his tone and-or with his pace. He's no Shakespeare.
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Date: 2013-07-01 03:26 am (UTC)Oh yeah. I'm not saying it's great writing. I mean the author takes four paragraphs to do something that not only could have been done in one or two, but could have been done without making readers who are identifying with his audience feel condescended to. Taking as long as he does opens him up to getting on people's nerves in a variety of ways, whether he gets on their nerves with his tone and-or with his pace. He's no Shakespeare.